poemranker ::Bliss without the Mistress by rlorrah

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Bliss without the Mistress

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Dec 2002 · 1 comment

I sat eagerly opening honeymoon pies deep into the night's distress wondering wildly into her eyes in my bliss without the mistress. Now i knew with crickets cries creeping in the dark for my ears have heard their lies piercing naked and stark. When my blood leaves lonely and my body is left stale i will stay to see how phony your tears are in your shell but until then i will miss my bliss without the mistress

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[7] Caducus 13-Dec-02/2:16 AM Reply
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have you ever had bliss WITH the mistress, now theirs a poem?