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Bliss without the Mistress (Other) by rlorrah
I sat eagerly opening honeymoon pies
deep into the night's distress
wondering wildly into her eyes
in my bliss without the mistress.
Now i knew with crickets cries
creeping in the dark
for my ears have heard their lies
piercing naked and stark.
When my blood leaves lonely
and my body is left stale
i will stay to see how phony
your tears are in your shell
but until then i will miss
my bliss without the mistress
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8395
Posted: December 12, 2002 10:33 PM PST; Last modified: December 12, 2002 10:33 PM PST
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have you ever had bliss WITH the mistress, now theirs a poem?