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Bliss without the Mistress (Other) by rlorrah
I sat eagerly opening honeymoon pies deep into the night's distress wondering wildly into her eyes in my bliss without the mistress. Now i knew with crickets cries creeping in the dark for my ears have heard their lies piercing naked and stark. When my blood leaves lonely and my body is left stale i will stay to see how phony your tears are in your shell but until then i will miss my bliss without the mistress

Up the ladder: finding your way
Down the ladder: Santa At My Steps

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8389
Posted: December 12, 2002 10:33 PM PST; Last modified: December 12, 2002 10:33 PM PST
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[7] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 13-Dec-02/2:16 AM | Reply
Like it,
have you ever had bliss WITH the mistress, now theirs a poem?
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