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finding your way (Free verse) by GTK
The tides bring in, what the wind takes out. Lost within the dreams, of winning the final bout. Hopes and dreams forever change, but the struggles will always remain. Left inside the empty burdens, to stand alone and not drift insane. Chasing after the cool summer breaze, realizing that you'll never be able to stay. Reality lies a foot apart from fantasy, now tell me can you find your way. Resting within the final eye, watching over the gravest cost. Replaced within a stronger place, finding the way completely lost. Stand alone upon the dessert, burned and shackels upon your feet. giving up all you loved and cherished, just so that the answers you can meet.

Up the ladder: Entrapment
Down the ladder: Bliss without the Mistress

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8388
Posted: December 6, 2002 9:52 AM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2002 9:52 AM PST
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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Dec-02/2:11 PM | Reply
could be honed.....a sensibility lingers close though..a
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