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Entrapment (Free verse) by MakenzieNy
When i first fell in love with you
you were my everything
i used to think we could concer all
then longer we're together
the more outta love i fall
you make me feel like a child
your only pushing me away
i want to be free to dream
not be worried about what you think
all i have ever wanted is to be loved by you
not controled you see
i can't do this no more
i used to love and believe in us as a whole
when everyone else doubted us
we proved them wrong
now i see that i never really loved you
you became a rush ,a quick high for me
everyone wanted me to stay away
you became an addiction,forbidden as it may seem
as the days go by
i resent you more and more
i hate you,i loath you
i hate the fact that you act like my puppeteer
all things must come to an end
i'm so tired and lonely,i need more
you have made me feel worthless,for too long
the day has come,for me to break these strings
i deserve to be happy
like i used to be,and if that means going on with out you
then that's the way it will be
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8393
Posted: December 5, 2002 10:03 PM PST; Last modified: December 5, 2002 10:03 PM PST
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