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Santa At My Steps (Free verse) by tarik

Crack! Silence... Woken from Christmas Eve sleep. My heart thuds rapidly echoing through my body. I feel a new presence in the house, But of course! Its Christmas night! Santa Claus is here! Creeping without a sound to peer around the corner, A distant red figure among the shadows, Near the Christmas tree. I stand soundless to gaze at the cherry red silhouette, Swish! Silence... Anxiously looking to the nearby bedroom My sleeping sister stirs in her slumber. I exhale with relief, Glancing back down the moonlit hallway Absence... The shadowed figure is gone. Santa has spotted me, And left. I must get back to sleep! If not, Santa shall not return. I tread swiftly into my bedroom and into my bed. And doze back into the night. Awaiting sunrise. Crack! Silence... My eyelids gradually expose the blue of my eyes. Morning.

savannah 12-May-03/5:53 PM
This is a great poem i think you should exhibit some of your other stuff as well... Your a great writer, i never knew you had stuff on this site. Well i hope you add to your poems id love to read others. ~Savannah~




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