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Sublime

Member since 2006 · Posted 18 Sep 2006 · Edited 19 Sep 2006 · 2 comments

Time is sublime. Both in duty and in kind. For it is known and unknown. Forgotten and remembered. Captured and lost. Misunderstood and defined. Time is our guide and companion. Conceived by the greatest champion.

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[8] Ranger 19-Sep-06/7:52 AM Reply

Decent enough, could do with having the metre worked on though. I'd make the second line consistent with the internal rhymes of the other three. 'Companion/champion' is nice.

[4] colbaby 20-Sep-06/5:20 AM Reply

All very herbal, I must say. Everything can be charachterised by dichotomy. Though I don't yet understand the last line. I have guides, none of them time. Perhaps concieved by the greatest champion, yet it's left to us mere mortals to merely percieve the conceived. Therein lies our biggest mistake. But isn't this sandpit fantastic?