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Sublime (Free verse) by nightowl

Time is sublime. Both in duty and in kind. For it is known and unknown. Forgotten and remembered. Captured and lost. Misunderstood and defined. Time is our guide and companion. Conceived by the greatest champion.

colbaby 20-Sep-06/5:20 AM
All very herbal, I must say. Everything can be charachterised by dichotomy. Though I don't yet understand the last line. I have guides, none of them time. Perhaps concieved by the greatest champion, yet it's left to us mere mortals to merely percieve the conceived. Therein lies our biggest mistake. But isn't this sandpit fantastic?




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