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Trash (Free verse) by drnick At night lights
shiver
They softly
glimmer
Upon a broken
glass
One might
wonder
Who could
uncover
And mistake this
for common trash
Some see the
beauty
Behind this
cruelty
The shards of
something nice
Historically were
one
But now found
undone
And given a
new sort of life
Up the ladder:
Song
Down the ladder:
Pulling the hill (formerly-in response to)
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Posted: July 22, 2006 6:24 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2006 6:24 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1788044 Overall Rank: 4931 Comments:
I love this kind of thing - colorful glimmers reflected from a pool of urine, for example. And the cadance is nice here, but with some glitches, at lest to my ear.
Night lights shiver softly glimmer Upon a broken glass just a thought.
Nice expression of the one man's trash is another's treasure sentiment.
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If one can find treasure in anything then one can find good in anything.