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Trash (Free verse) by drnick

At night lights shiver They softly glimmer Upon a broken glass One might wonder Who could uncover And mistake this for common trash Some see the beauty Behind this cruelty The shards of something nice Historically were one But now found undone And given a new sort of life

Ranger 23-Jul-06/1:18 PM
This is awesome. I love the loose rhymes; rhythm was a little swift for me but it still worked well enough. Just altogether really, really good to read. Glad you're writing again!




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