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Outside the Perfection, Into the Yellow (Free verse) by Sunny
I imagine being insane,
inside white walls with no glow,
but the resolution of minced cocaine
smeared all over their stances-
the ill brightness of a dentist's office
that cuts off wind from the sky
and the sky itself. A sour smell,
glass door...raw and white, so white...
Outside Spring has conquered all
with poking poppies
and lavender bushes that blot a naked blue background.
The hummingbird with his velocity
and the season of babies.
A sun that winces at me
in its natural light.
Immortality melts in my mouth like
sugar, as I ride the day slow
with the sun to my west.
Two magnolia trees and a mimosa-
this is what I savor before the ivory bulbs
shined up the cap of my head;
I just had a colorful cat nap.
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Posted: March 22, 2006 9:53 AM PST; Last modified: March 22, 2006 9:53 AM PST
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Good stuff. Welcome.