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Field Work (Free verse) by Christof
Our feet, the first time, padding into the field
Amongst dew and worm-casts and grass-tips rubbing
Our unshod and sodden uncertainty
With delicious wet tongues of green on our toes
The first time, padding into the field -
The second time, it was easy, brighter and drier,
The sun degrees higher, the way now plain
And the third time, a noontime bored stupid by heat,
The prickle of barbs, of dry twigs, of insects
On bare feet, the last time, the end of my fieldwork.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2
Weighted score: 5.2622466
Overall Rank: 3990
Posted: June 19, 2007 3:34 AM PDT; Last modified: June 19, 2007 3:34 AM PDT
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This is clearly a poeme about doing something naughty.