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Free verse № 152558

Field Work

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Jun 2007 · 3 comments

Our feet, the first time, padding into the field Amongst dew and worm-casts and grass-tips rubbing Our unshod and sodden uncertainty With delicious wet tongues of green on our toes The first time, padding into the field - The second time, it was easy, brighter and drier, The sun degrees higher, the way now plain And the third time, a noontime bored stupid by heat, The prickle of barbs, of dry twigs, of insects On bare feet, the last time, the end of my fieldwork.

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[8] Ranger 21-Jun-07/5:13 AM Reply
Marvellous to see you still alive and writing, Mr. C.

This is clearly a poeme about doing something naughty.
[n/a] Christof › Ranger 21-Jun-07/5:42 AM Reply
I've been inspired to get up off my arse recently, for some reason. Possibly having a new baby. And of course the best thing to do is come straight back here and have a ruck with Rockmage, but never mind. Glad you liked this and yes, it is about something a bit naughty.
[9] deleted user 26-Jun-07/6:12 PM Reply
Very good--first class imagery--I absolutely love "a noontime bored stupid by heat."