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Field Work (Free verse) by Christof

Our feet, the first time, padding into the field Amongst dew and worm-casts and grass-tips rubbing Our unshod and sodden uncertainty With delicious wet tongues of green on our toes The first time, padding into the field - The second time, it was easy, brighter and drier, The sun degrees higher, the way now plain And the third time, a noontime bored stupid by heat, The prickle of barbs, of dry twigs, of insects On bare feet, the last time, the end of my fieldwork.

Christof 21-Jun-07/5:42 AM
I've been inspired to get up off my arse recently, for some reason. Possibly having a new baby. And of course the best thing to do is come straight back here and have a ruck with Rockmage, but never mind. Glad you liked this and yes, it is about something a bit naughty.




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