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Bush Fire (Free verse) by ingwa
A problem in the air
Feel and sense it all around
Fauna in a panic
Smoke and ashes from a blaze
Heart skips a beat
Rhino and antelope
Birds all around
A presence is known
It cuts through the grass
Consumes all in it's path
Baboons start screaming
Run, hide, but to where
There are casualties
In the wild
Hundreds of trees
Burnt to a cinder
The rain comes
Pouring down
Quenching the thirst
That the blaze brings
The smell changes
Scorched earth and steam
For miles all around
The sight of cremation
The choke in my throat
Dissipates and I breath
Knowing that the bush
Will survive this dreadful pass
Three months later
The grass is all green
Antelope feed on the shoots
Succulent and sweet
It happens in nature
The risk is always there
For another blaze like that
Pure nightmarish true
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Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2005 1:11 PM PDT
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For example on the last verse:
Always the risk
An act of God
Always new
Never expected
Risks always presented
By natures hand or not
Catches you off guard
Surprises never far