poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Bush Fire by ingwa.

ingwa17 May 2005

Dovina, thank you for your enlightening comment. I wrote this poem one afternoon picturing one of the many scenes left after very destructive and rampant bush fires. When I read it, it appeared to lack just a little something but I wasn't too sure. I am now and rather like the sample that you have so kindly left. I hope you don't mind, but I was hoping you would please consider the following:

Risks always presented
By natures hand or not
Catches you off guard
Surprises never far