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An Ode To Mr. Moon (Acrostic) (Acrostic) by Bhaskaryya
Illuminating the darkest of the nights
Lonesome, in the vast sky he hovers
Oblivious of timeâs eternal flight
Voyeur of the midnight lovers.
Eternally his youth springs
Yule mirth to barren autumn
Onlookerâs delight, when wild geese spread their wings
Under the silver midnight blossom.
Kith of silver and kin of fire
Alone yet, in oblivion he stands
Surely the nightâs unchallenged âSireâ
Traveling majestically across all earthly lands.
Ubiquitous in each moment of time
Revivifying the night with his light sublime
Irradiating one and all he rests, in his perpetual youthâs prime.
Acrostic Message: I Love You Kasturi.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7932
Posted: January 25, 2005 9:14 AM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2005 9:14 AM PST
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Kasturi is Indian, no?
You might want to trim some prepositions, maybe? Why do I harp on that so?