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Member since 2004 · Posted 5 Jul 2004 · 4 comments

I tried to be like you But I'm not allowed I try to act disinterested But no one comes to see I try to hate But no one cares either I try to succeed But then it's just too typical I try to end But you stop me

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[9] Dovina 5-Jul-04/3:24 PM Reply

Good, especially verse 2.

[7] zodiac 5-Jul-04/9:22 PM Reply

If you think success is typical, you should take a look at the last 13,235 poems posted on poemranker.

[8] edpeterson › zodiac 6-Jul-04/6:57 AM Reply

TRYING to succeed is just too typical...is what i think he is trying to say....but that is not any more accurate. second verse is great.

[7] richa › edpeterson 6-Jul-04/11:06 AM Reply

with you on the second verse.