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Chasz Misleading
I tried to be like you But I'm not allowed I try to act disinterested But no one comes to see I try to hate But no one cares either I try to succeed But then it's just too typical I try to end But you stop me
edpeterson
6-Jul-04/6:57 AM
TRYING to succeed is just too typical...is what i think he is trying to say....but that is not any more accurate. second verse is great.
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