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Forbidden (Free verse) by Chasz Misleading

I tried to be like you But I'm not allowed I try to act disinterested But no one comes to see I try to hate But no one cares either I try to succeed But then it's just too typical I try to end But you stop me

richa 6-Jul-04/11:06 AM
with you on the second verse.




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