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I care 4 you (Free verse) by jessicasgurl I guess im wishin my life away,
with these things ill never say,
it don't do me any good,
its just a waste of time,
what use is it to you whats on my mind,
if it aint comin out were noot goin anywhere,
why can't I tell you that i care?
cause im feelin scared or nervous,
tryin to be so perfect cause your worth it.
Now whats wrong wit my tounge,
these words keep slippin away.
i studder i stumble like i've got nuttin to say,
but wait ive got sumthin to say
i care 4 you
now finally these words come out of my mouth.
Up the ladder:
mothers
Down the ladder:
A Good Man Ruined
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Posted: June 22, 2004 10:46 AM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2004 10:46 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9284782 Overall Rank: 9351 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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jessicasgurl @ 24.118.251.83
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22-Jun-04/6:31 PM
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hey yall i think that this one is by best that i have posted and i would like yalls oppinion on thank yall
go read the one i care 4 you and it is alot better than my other one srry if some of you are haters on my work but whateva i have ppl who like so idk what the haters think but yall go read my other poem "I CARE 4 YOU" and rate it plz holla imma fixin to bounce so PE@CE OUT
im stuck in this little box help
Well done for breaking every cardinal rule which is held sacred on poemranker.
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