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I care 4 you (Free verse) by jessicasgurl

I guess im wishin my life away, with these things ill never say, it don't do me any good, its just a waste of time, what use is it to you whats on my mind, if it aint comin out were noot goin anywhere, why can't I tell you that i care? cause im feelin scared or nervous, tryin to be so perfect cause your worth it. Now whats wrong wit my tounge, these words keep slippin away. i studder i stumble like i've got nuttin to say, but wait ive got sumthin to say i care 4 you now finally these words come out of my mouth.

jessicasgurl 22-Jun-04/6:42 PM
go read the one i care 4 you and it is alot better than my other one srry if some of you are haters on my work but whateva i have ppl who like so idk what the haters think but yall go read my other poem "I CARE 4 YOU" and rate it plz holla imma fixin to bounce so PE@CE OUT




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