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I care 4 you (Free verse) by jessicasgurl

I guess im wishin my life away, with these things ill never say, it don't do me any good, its just a waste of time, what use is it to you whats on my mind, if it aint comin out were noot goin anywhere, why can't I tell you that i care? cause im feelin scared or nervous, tryin to be so perfect cause your worth it. Now whats wrong wit my tounge, these words keep slippin away. i studder i stumble like i've got nuttin to say, but wait ive got sumthin to say i care 4 you now finally these words come out of my mouth.

Stephen Robins 23-Jun-04/7:19 AM
Well done for breaking every cardinal rule which is held sacred on poemranker.





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