Re: a comment on death by xunitedx	27-Apr-04/6:27 PM
that sucks - here is mine dark angel once was the man but he lingered to long in that van he wallows in shit and he can't take a hit so hit him as hard as you can
Re: a comment on death by xunitedx	26-Apr-04/8:00 AM
i didn't try to imply that. i guess it's just the way it came out. it's just that i don't worry about anything really.
Re: a comment on death by xunitedx	26-Apr-04/7:55 AM
wow, you're not bashing my poem. i even made up a nasty limerick about you for the first time you did bash one of my poems :). not that i really care just cuz nobody else has done that, at least that i have seen.
Re: a comment on jammin in the basement by xunitedx	23-Apr-04/9:32 PM
plus, i think stuff that doesnt rhyme is maddening. it's called different opinions. i've never written anyting that doesn't rhyme.
Re: a comment on jammin in the basement by xunitedx	23-Apr-04/9:30 PM
i was drunk, and need some lyrics to sing so i could join in on the jammin going on in my friends basement.
Re: a comment on pain like mine by xunitedx	21-Apr-04/7:19 PM
that's pretty much what i was goin for. thanks.
Re: a comment on reflection by xunitedx	20-Apr-04/5:39 PM
- "...we sometimes have rallies at Lou's or Pasquale's" hahaha i like that one
Re: a comment on reflection by xunitedx	20-Apr-04/2:40 PM
i totally get your point. i thought about the capitalization thing, just didnt feel like doin it. ballet(yes i know how to pronounce it) and valley(or alley or rally) do not rhyme.
Re: a comment on reflection by xunitedx	20-Apr-04/1:13 PM
ballets doesn't rhyme. and ballys is like the most popular gym in the country. i have never heard of anyone not hearing of it before.
Re: a comment on reflection by xunitedx	19-Apr-04/10:32 PM
no, i meant ballys. it's a chain of gyms. everything before the last line is what we do everyday. the last line is meant to be the only thing we do find easily is our loss of innocence.