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pain like mine (Free verse) by xunitedx
every day i wake up
and every day i learn
if something doesn't change i just might burn
i'm tired of being lonely
i'm tired of being hurt
if i can't find the way you can bury me in the dirt
this is how i feel
and this is what i'll say
if i can make it to tomorrow all my pain will go away
so i hope to find the strength
and i hope to fight the pain
if i believe in myself i can make it through the rain
my life is one big struggle
but my life is mine to live
if that is what it takes then my life is what i'll give
so now it's a new day
and now is the right time
if i could grant you just one wish you'll never feel this pain like mine
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6360
Posted: April 20, 2004 8:28 PM PDT; Last modified: April 21, 2004 8:41 AM PDT
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