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pain like mine (Free verse) by xunitedx

every day i wake up and every day i learn if something doesn't change i just might burn i'm tired of being lonely i'm tired of being hurt if i can't find the way you can bury me in the dirt this is how i feel and this is what i'll say if i can make it to tomorrow all my pain will go away so i hope to find the strength and i hope to fight the pain if i believe in myself i can make it through the rain my life is one big struggle but my life is mine to live if that is what it takes then my life is what i'll give so now it's a new day and now is the right time if i could grant you just one wish you'll never feel this pain like mine

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Apr-04/1:29 PM
Great comment.




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