on haiku 1 by Crakyamuni
13 Jan 2003, 1:28 PM
euphonious
on crack of light by inka
10 Jan 2003, 6:51 PM
the title alone..gets a ten. lol.
on some deleted poem
13 Jan 2003, 1:14 PM
from couch to couch regrettably. care for a sun dial? this place gets a bit corpulent. Let me know when you publish. i'll be the fucking dildo dressed like poppy longstocking listening to hole and blowing fruit striped gum bubbles second from the last in line.
on some deleted poem
13 Jan 2003, 1:18 PM
Do you think Abraham put I-zick under the knife, because god told him too? Wrong answer r-pock.
on Little Miss Muff by Spider-Man
13 Jan 2003, 1:23 PM
What? and leave all of these fine suitors behind?
on some deleted poem
13 Jan 2003, 1:35 PM
I see your winnie the pooh, and raise you some beef tar tar.
on some deleted poem
13 Jan 2003, 1:05 PM
Aids at a glance. You fucking idiot. Have you read his aids limmericks, or gilded stumpes of olde, or childe of my buttocks? No you haven't, because if you had.
You'd feel even fucking more pathetic right now than a chipmunked muffler. fucking idiot.
he wouldn't even scan this stale jar of spittle. you fail.
You'd feel even fucking more pathetic right now than a chipmunked muffler. fucking idiot.
he wouldn't even scan this stale jar of spittle. you fail.
on this tuesday morning by teacup
10 Jan 2003, 6:37 PM
here's an idea. go back inside, get a loan. buy a car. bohemian rhapsody..that's it nentwined i got it...freddy mercury! (not you tea cup, something i read earlier). yes MOMA MIA MOMA MIA MOMA MIA MAGNIFICO! (also:not this teasip [or whatever your damn name is] the song}.
on Summer Lights by Brighteyes
10 Jan 2003, 6:40 PM
please jesus anything but the wet dead led through the slick dewy meadows THE PAIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
on Haiku Moon by [mojo]
10 Jan 2003, 6:47 PM
THE LAST TIME I SAW SOMETHING COME OUT OF THE MEADOW IT WAS THE WET DEAD LED, AND oh sorry, that my friend was essentialy my last straw. we must move past the meadows now...lets walk together for a moment behind the mere fields and meadows, amd yes even the birds gosh darnit let's get to THE MISERABLE FOREST OF DECREPID REDUNDANT SYMBOLIC TERMS AHHHHHHHH! forfeit, classical poetry died today my friend..you fought hard, but unfortunately art school one..i've seen the future and this aint it...have a 6 for prosperity though.
on Haiku Moon by [mojo]
10 Jan 2003, 6:49 PM
watch..into the air goes my flaming bag of puppy shit. plurp..
poo poo. doo doo. the same old same old..i know it's safe..i know it's refreshing, but if you did a google search on it..you'd faint.
poo poo. doo doo. the same old same old..i know it's safe..i know it's refreshing, but if you did a google search on it..you'd faint.
on crack of light by inka
10 Jan 2003, 6:53 PM
"the powdered clounds are falling" i'm sorry, but you are smoking hard core crack, put the pipe down..take a minute before the powdery clounds come and carry you away.
on crack of light by inka
10 Jan 2003, 6:54 PM
yes. it sucks. i'm blind now, and mortally wounded. (i tried to complain, but it wouldn't let me, so here's my complaint)
on profile of an abuser by inka
10 Jan 2003, 7:04 PM
a drastic improvement. what part of michigan are you from..Troy. Southfield.Birmingkam, perhaps Saginaw? you're fired. have an 8
i took all of your poems and squeezed them into one doghnut, sorry
i couldn't resist.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/shen%20ring.mp3
i couldn't resist.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/shen%20ring.mp3
on some deleted poem
10 Jan 2003, 8:00 PM
i'm sorry, but nentwined..you stole my awards idea and took it to another level. lol. erotica lol. this is hilarious..everyones gonna want highlighted characters now. Both you and Settle, deserve a standing ovation.
on some deleted poem
10 Jan 2003, 8:39 PM
one of my favorites (the retard poem)..
i wrote you a love song..
because..well..i love you
http://gangbox.com/mp3/play%20chess%3F.m
our love is forever..oh can settle come with us..if we bring you a whole skinned babbit with a sack of potatoes?
i wrote you a love song..
because..well..i love you
http://gangbox.com/mp3/play%20chess%3F.m
our love is forever..oh can settle come with us..if we bring you a whole skinned babbit with a sack of potatoes?
on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub
10 Jan 2003, 8:03 PM
superb..you've won an ostrich legged hut.. and a life time supply of wigs and lipstick...God's wife is a ' serious' poet...not a weed eater.