Re: Why Me? by Tarquin De La Bog |
20-Aug-02/3:22 AM |
this poem is kinda good.i like it, despite what other people think.i dont get why people like b here can comment so much hatred about a poem.
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Re: purple by youngweirdo |
19-Aug-02/6:31 AM |
sounds good B.maybe you should put that in as one of your poems.
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Re: ''*Night*'' by youngweirdo |
18-Aug-02/6:48 AM |
what thefuck is going on none of this makes sense.
it makes as much sense as a beach with no sand or water?
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Re: ''*Night*'' by youngweirdo |
18-Aug-02/6:44 AM |
you do not want to heart me if i have to say something to you.
i will blow your tiny little adalecent mind and if this doesnt make any sense to you then it doesnt to me neither so there!!!!!!
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Re: sky by youngweirdo |
18-Aug-02/5:27 AM |
your sayin that my poems are fucked up.
have you seen your own.
i mean what the hell is happening there?
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Re: ''*Night*'' by youngweirdo |
18-Aug-02/5:00 AM |
not evey single poem a person writes has to make sense.
so in a way this poem is a misuse of language but if you look at it in a certain way you would see that it is not meant to make sense and i dont think it ever will
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Re: ''*Night*'' by youngweirdo |
17-Aug-02/5:51 PM |
horus8 likes being rude doesn't he/she.
in nearly every comment he/she gives there is always rudeness so please tell me why is that? do you have some uncrontrolable disease which makes you want to think of rude things to add to nearly all your comments or sumthing?
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Re: The Word by Tascobar |
17-Aug-02/5:27 PM |
what the fuck?
talk about dazed and confused
thats what this poem left me as.
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Re: Sanity by Tascobar |
17-Aug-02/5:25 PM |
i just dont get it.
why are nearly all your poems so darn short?
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Re: The Big Push by Tascobar |
17-Aug-02/5:22 PM |
i would just like to say brilliant poem.
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Re: The Power of Green by Tascobar |
17-Aug-02/5:19 PM |
what the fuck has this got to do with the colour green?
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Re: ''*Night*'' by youngweirdo |
17-Aug-02/5:15 PM |
whell for your information i have not yet done my G.C.S.E'S so dont even bother to compare it to them
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