Re: Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit	30-Aug-02/10:41 AM
Thanks DA, you are probably right. Maybe I should call old Eddie today and see if he has any time free. This is one of your more asinine comments. But it seemed to be shot off in a rash of asinine comments.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Aug-02/11:14 AM
What is it with you and birds? Again a knack for the closing, but I get a bit confused in the middle--the man, the boy (i.e. the man comes before you establish...and so on).
Re: The Journal by 1Sapphire1	30-Aug-02/11:17 AM
Tighten this up and I think you might have something interesting. Think it through, maybe try to create a more solid image rather than tell the reader how you felt (hurt) and what you wished for.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/1:56 PM
Nothing wrong with heckling a nation of murderers and thieves and built by slaves You know razor girl you quite possibly make the most uneducated asinine comments on this site. Are you just bitter because Shin happens to be one of the worst poets on this site?
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/2:36 PM
Shin is pretty bad, and I bet his fairy tale hobbit prose is a real breath of fresh air. first off I want to clarify I am by no means a patriot (I am a journalist, nationalism is against my oath). that said: Again, you make yourself sound uneducated. The entire US of A was not built by slaves, where the fuck did you get that one. And when did Canada become immune to such antics or are you know no longer connected to the British, symbolically or otherwise. I believe one of your biggest entrepreneurs is trying like mad for knighthood. Fuck, a fourth of your own country does not even like you and wants to secede because you are trying to toss your language, among other things at them. Jesus, and if Canada is so fucking sweet and cuddly why are your corporations coming down here in "good ole capitalist America" and fucking up our environment and then bailing? It is even steven, we dump our trash up there, you fuck up the West with your multinationals. What the fuck do you read? You sound like a fucking little girl who needs to do some serious reading instead of relying on lovecrat to guide your way. Your brash statements are so generalist it is obvious you really know nothing of the world. Have you been anywhere outside of Halifax. I can send you a whole list of Canadian wrong doings but what is the point. I try to think things through before I open my mouth. Of course, Bush is an idiot, but the multinationals love him, including the Canadians. So first, learn about your own fucking county before you make such childish statement. And try to stick to poetry.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/2:39 PM
And as far as pompous and pretentious, it comes down to this. Shin's stuff is mindless hogwash. At least I can fucking write something that proves I do more that watch reruns of bad "American" TV.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/2:58 PM
See what I mean, instead of saying anything worthwhile you make a personal attack. I am sorry, I do not wave a flag, I am not a redneck, I have never been to a rodeo. I would destroy you in a debate. What to you bring to the table: a GED? You have limited knowledge of everything you say. Instead of finding out what the other side believes, you make assumptions. This is why liberalism gets a bad rap. Because of you people. Here I fight to get points across in regarded publications and you defeat everything I am doing with your uneducated banter. You could not defend against my points because you are clueless and finally someone has called you on it. You and your weak poet friends sit up the in Canada bitching about this and bitching about that but you do not understand the reason for things and thus, you make hideous overgeneralizations and sound ignorant. And I'm sorry I never made it past the a team and sexadous, both childish. And my sense of humor extends far beyond what is amusing to pseudo- intellectuals who think they are being clever.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/3:05 PM
Jesus, you are truly and idiot. You do not even you how bad you sound when you try to go deeper into the subject. And if you want to read any of my work I can direct you to the New Republic, Mother Jones, Utne Reader to name a few. Quit watching CNN. Ouit it, quit it. Please read a credible book. Write something credible, and then talk to me. You are truly stupid.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/3:33 PM
Actually, no I do not. I simply called you on a hasty generalization you made stating Americans were murders who built a country on slavery. I have never killed anyone. Sorry. Yes, we had slaves in our history, but I believe they were primary responsible for agricultural growth in the south post 1830, and by that time industrialization, which propelled the US and Britain and France, etc, etc (sorry Canada) economically, was still a zygote. And I believe Canada was also guilty of slavery for a time being. And you were not so nice to the all Indians always. la de da. Am I on your level now? Do you understand? I never made a personal attack. That would be saying something like you smelly stupid bitch why do not you shave you pits...well. I was merely calling into play you education, because you sound a bit naive. Sorry, I am not being vague. My points are clear. You just get back into a corner and spout "oh, you redneck, hick no-it-all." whatever. Some recent pubs for you. American Prospect: Summer 2002 Subject: Income transfers. Forthcoming: New Republic: subject: LA School system and Roy Romer. There you go sweetie. Don't hurt your brain. And what is the point of writing something ignorant to piss people you call idiots off. So you and the buds can giggle. I am done wasting my time with you.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/6:43 PM
johns hopkins
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/6:45 PM
Oh yes, here comes the dark one to set us straight. But let me tell you oh rational one. I am not full of shit. I just had quite the long poo and I am feeling quite refreshed. Maybe you should both try the same thing. I was never earnest. That is the fun of it you nitwit.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/6:45 PM
Oh yes, here comes the dark one to set us straight. But let me tell you oh rational one. I am not full of shit. I just had quite the long poo and I am feeling quite refreshed. Maybe you should both try the same thing. I was never earnest. That is the fun of it you nitwit.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/7:19 PM
Palpable? You have no idea Mr. mysterious. The world is an easy place without eye contact and body language. So really what the fuck do you know. You are in the same boat as Shin, except you are just a bit more clever to say something behind it. That is all you have. And the same babbling as me. No, I never tried to change my tune. I just finally realized whom I was talking too. Simple as that. It was simply a reaction to an blatantly stupid comment. and settle down anagram. Your team won!
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/7:41 PM
Wow, it is possible to get under you skin. I could give a fuck about the jangle boy and his girl. She made a fucked up statement, so I called her on it. And what is the point of posting shit on the site if you can secretly write genius words. Come on. Shit is shit funny or not. And I am the ugly child, and hate the fucking other kids. I bet you are ugly too. Why the fuck would you name yourself dark angel if you were a beauty. You got the fork I got to brush and they sent off to school in our boots and knickers so the other kiddies could have a laugh. And now we are bitter old fucks who prowl the internet looking to rid the world of teenage poetry. blah the blah. And, I don't mind writing. It is what I do all day, so why not put some word here and there? No secret hand gestures. If you saw a bit of compassion in my comments, I was just trying to prevent her from making a fool of herself to anyone who has read a book. Have you had that shit yet? I think you need it.
Re: Here by anagram	31-Aug-02/7:51 PM
Better put more stones on hadrian's wall before this one comes to fisticuffs.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Sep-02/11:53 AM
This is er...good.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Sep-02/11:57 AM
Woe is I. I liked until the end. Then it plopped as a lifeless defense mechanism. I wanted the first part to hold up. Blah!
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Sep-02/12:02 PM
Again, a decent go of it from the start but the last couple of lines are convoluted. It weakens the entire poem.
Re: The Big NO by alexander	1-Sep-02/12:05 PM
A bit melodramatic, but also a bit intriguing. where dreams go to die is a bit much but better overall.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Sep-02/12:08 PM
Ugh! My favorite part of this is how you vote on it with your other personas. Lol. It is decent, but 10? More like 4/5.