regarding some deleted poem...	27-Sep-02/1:59 PM
I'm sorry Amealea. I realise you are a sensitive sort and I don't want you to pick up your poems and leave. That just would not be right. I am actually both z and balth and I promise I will leave you alone from now on. Even in the chat room. you new friend, fred.
Re: The Drive In (Drugs broke her, she broke me) by <{Baba^Yaga}>	27-Sep-02/2:27 PM
Yo, Baba, as they say, "break a leg" tomorrow night! PK
Re: A Time for More War by dougsoderstrom	27-Sep-02/2:36 PM
But it is not really coming across as satire like a few of your other poems and therefore, in my opinion, it comes out as being straightforward, which, in my opinion, makes it sound ridiculous rather than humorous, which is possibly your intended meaning. In a situation like this you go almost use the tactic of crossing the line with humour which would force people to be disgusted and stunned, but force laughter as a nervous response. I do not know, you are the psychologist; you should really know how to manipulate a good yarn. As far as the actual recourse, I agree, but again I think it lies in the current policy that is before congress and most of the agenda is being puppeted through Bush by DICK. This is all his policy. He was spouting "pre-emptive" way back when. Invading Iraq is only a first step. Did you read the policy? It seems we no longer respect the concept of sovereignty considering we will no longer allow any other country to compete with us as a military super power. So does this mean pre-emptive strikes are in the future toward China?
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Sep-02/8:32 PM
Okay who's the guy-Christof, babbit,DA, Dolyum, Frass (ha!)- come clean when you write these kinds of poems while on the curse.
Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn	27-Sep-02/8:35 PM
This poem is horrible!!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Sep-02/10:43 PM
Change the title and you have an excellent poem. You and z just spout these things!
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Sep-02/10:56 PM
Isn't it just the World Bank?
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Sep-02/11:34 PM
Why did you drop the s on word? Hey now you know everyone will read it! Then you can change the title and send it to press.
Re: A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle	30-Sep-02/8:48 AM
Take a picture. thank you ever so much for wasting my time on this good day september 30, 2002. Take out the donut whole and really what do you have? a zero.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Sep-02/8:51 AM
What place. you maight have something here if you find the proper context. As is, it is confusing.
Re: Cheap Thrills by Owner of the Sky	30-Sep-02/8:53 AM
Told me to much. Good thought, but it is not communicated effectively.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Sep-02/11:25 AM
It is a haiku DA, and it is a rather decent one.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Sep-02/11:27 AM
sucks as usual.
Re: Parallel by aperfecttool77	30-Sep-02/11:37 AM
You have littered the recent list with your work. At least it reveals you revise and that will be important for this poem/lyric.
Re: At The Sloane Slattery on Saturday by Limness	30-Sep-02/11:55 AM
"The air is cool, the sun is hot, In between seasons, and time's forgot" I do not like this, no I do not, I do not like this I think it flops. I guess I want more from the ending. If it was as good as the first stanza, you would have it. I am not going to vote until you quit stopping off at the bar before coming home.
Re: the room's a'spinnin' by nentwined	30-Sep-02/12:07 PM
huh.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Sep-02/2:05 PM
wow, this is heavy. Steven is like way cool. I thought "kutters" were actually :cutters," which were old stone masons. Didn't you see the greatest cycling movie of all time, "Breaking Away"? I am scared. Stuttering quite frankly with the seriousness of this amazing poem. Pull out the razor!! And the eyeliner. And just for future reference you are not living in Missouri but Misery! That will make all the difference.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Sep-02/7:19 PM
Is this a product of your deceitful thoughts over the weekend? Or is this to a father. Anyway, I am not sure I like it so much. Usually I haiku is more of a straight up image and this feels more like a statement.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Sep-02/7:20 PM
but I like the title.
regarding some deleted poem...	30-Sep-02/7:26 PM
and why do you put apostrophes around your titles?