on Tomb by GekoHawaii
2 Apr 2003, 10:46 PM
I like it, its just that last line... "as my hapiness dies" i dunno maybe i am just nitpicking. Very good.
on Morning Rainbows by Spindle
2 Apr 2003, 10:50 PM
Good job!. just dont OD :P
on Morning Rainbows by Spindle
2 Apr 2003, 10:49 PM
Good job!. just dont OD :P
on Past by Dostoyevsky
2 Apr 2003, 10:55 PM
Very good, Keep it up.