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Morning Rainbows (Lyric) by Spindle Take a green pill for headaches
A blue pill for spots
Take a yellow pill for stomachaches
And a red one for thoughts
Take a purple pill for sight
And a brown one for stealth
Then an orange one for frights
And enjoy your pretty rainbow of health
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Posted: February 5, 2003 6:48 PM PST; Last modified: February 5, 2003 6:48 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.220199 Overall Rank: 4334 Comments:
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Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.225
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6-Feb-03/7:12 AM
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After the first two lines, I expected some Sylvia Plath esque darkness was going to be there under the ironically placid surface. It never happened. Gutted.
cynical. as it should be.
:)
This was so almost there... the last line tosses it though.
Good job!. just dont OD :P
Good job!. just dont OD :P
I'm with squiggles. spot on.
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