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Morning Rainbows (Lyric) by Spindle

Take a green pill for headaches A blue pill for spots Take a yellow pill for stomachaches And a red one for thoughts Take a purple pill for sight And a brown one for stealth Then an orange one for frights And enjoy your pretty rainbow of health

Nicholas Jones 6-Feb-03/7:12 AM
After the first two lines, I expected some Sylvia Plath esque darkness was going to be there under the ironically placid surface. It never happened. Gutted.




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