on My Lie by josiefiend
20 Nov 2003, 9:48 AM
This damn thing won't let me do italics, so please imagine that "This is my rifle, / There are many like it but this one is mine..." and "This is my rifle, this is my gun. / This is for fighting, this is for fun." are both in italics. Thanx guys!
replying on Love Poem by josiefiend
1 Nov 2003, 5:24 PM
Ah, such a usefull comment! My hero! That's a good suggestion. I do intend to clean this one up, think it could be better put together as well.
on Purgatory of Consciousness by crims0ngh0st
30 Oct 2003, 5:10 PM
It's a nice poem, but it leaves me wanting punctuation or breaks, something.
replying on Kiss Me by josiefiend
30 Oct 2003, 4:16 PM
Jeez, aren't we forward? hehe