Re: Purgatory of Consciousness by crims0ngh0st	30-Oct-03/5:10 PM
It's a nice poem, but it leaves me wanting punctuation or breaks, something.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Nov-03/10:50 AM
Great poem very original. I really like the structure too.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Nov-03/10:54 AM
This would be awesome at a reading, a great performance poem. Great ideas and great rhythym.
Re: My Lie by josiefiend	20-Nov-03/9:48 AM
This damn thing won't let me do italics, so please imagine that "This is my rifle, / There are many like it but this one is mine..." and "This is my rifle, this is my gun. / This is for fighting, this is for fun." are both in italics. Thanx guys!