on Purgatory of Consciousness by crims0ngh0st
30 Oct 2003, 5:10 PM
It's a nice poem, but it leaves me wanting punctuation or breaks, something.
on some deleted poem
2 Nov 2003, 10:50 AM
Great poem very original. I really like the structure too.
on some deleted poem
2 Nov 2003, 10:54 AM
This would be awesome at a reading, a great performance poem. Great ideas and great rhythym.
on My Lie by josiefiend
20 Nov 2003, 9:48 AM
This damn thing won't let me do italics, so please imagine that "This is my rifle, / There are many like it but this one is mine..." and "This is my rifle, this is my gun. / This is for fighting, this is for fun." are both in italics. Thanx guys!