Re: sewer rat by irishfolksuicide	10-Oct-03/8:35 AM
Abuse of the humble apostrophe (or in this case, underuse) reaches new heights.
Re: a comment on The Love of -=Dark_Angel=- and J.B.Manning by ho_hum	2-Oct-03/3:27 AM
So true, but sadly the force of your message was entirely undermined by a six syllable second line. I am, however, unlikely to pen further poems about DA's infection with the gay.
Re: A Best Friend by Birdman42s	29-Sep-03/8:01 AM
This is truly the most agonisingly tacky thing I have ever had the misfortune to read. I have the greatest respect for your feelings, but this is absolute drivel. I refer you to: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=51209 http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=67061 I wish I could think of a better word, implying more sicklyness than 'saccharine'. But I can't.
Re: a comment on Wasted Words by ho_hum	29-Sep-03/1:50 AM
Commas Perhaps too many Perhaps poorly applied. But so preferable To excessive use Of line breaks For the same purpose.
Re: a comment on Wasted Words by ho_hum	29-Sep-03/1:48 AM
In a severe case of nork squeezing they certainly look pretty unwilling. The second last line would look a bit odd without the last one, but fair enough.
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	25-Sep-03/2:56 AM
A work of breathtaking vision
Re: POEM FOR PREPS by Brittanyy	24-Sep-03/2:15 AM
Does this mean, oh joy of joys, that you are leaving? I also see that you have deleted "comments on this site part 2", which I take it means you are refusing my challenge to name 10 great minds who have achieved great things at or before the age of 16. By the way the scintillating rythms of this poem have scored white hot lines across my soul. -10-