on sewer rat by irishfolksuicide
10 Oct 2003, 8:35 AM
Abuse of the humble apostrophe (or in this case, underuse) reaches new heights.
replying on The Love of -=Dark_Angel=- and J.B.Manning by ho_hum
2 Oct 2003, 3:27 AM
So true, but sadly the force of your message was entirely undermined by a six syllable second line.
I am, however, unlikely to pen further poems about DA's infection with the gay.
I am, however, unlikely to pen further poems about DA's infection with the gay.
on A Best Friend by Birdman42s
29 Sep 2003, 8:01 AM
This is truly the most agonisingly tacky thing I have ever had the misfortune to read. I have the greatest respect for your feelings, but this is absolute drivel. I refer you to:
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
I wish I could think of a better word, implying more sicklyness than 'saccharine'. But I can't.
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
I wish I could think of a better word, implying more sicklyness than 'saccharine'. But I can't.
replying on Wasted Words by ho_hum
29 Sep 2003, 1:50 AM
Commas
Perhaps too many
Perhaps poorly applied.
But so preferable
To excessive use
Of line breaks
For the same purpose.
Perhaps too many
Perhaps poorly applied.
But so preferable
To excessive use
Of line breaks
For the same purpose.
replying on Wasted Words by ho_hum
29 Sep 2003, 1:48 AM
In a severe case of nork squeezing they certainly look pretty unwilling. The second last line would look a bit odd without the last one, but fair enough.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
25 Sep 2003, 2:56 AM
A work of breathtaking vision
on POEM FOR PREPS by Brittanyy
24 Sep 2003, 2:15 AM
Does this mean, oh joy of joys, that you are leaving? I also see that you have deleted "comments on this site part 2", which I take it means you are refusing my challenge to name 10 great minds who have achieved great things at or before the age of 16.
By the way the scintillating rythms of this poem have scored white hot lines across my soul. -10-
By the way the scintillating rythms of this poem have scored white hot lines across my soul. -10-