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20 most recent comments by Bachus (121-140)

regarding some deleted poem... 19-Nov-03/6:51 PM
Have you read my Sestinas? They're splendid, as splendid as an exploding parrot, and foreign dogfood.
Re: What am I doing? by INTRANSIT 24-Nov-03/5:21 PM
Try teenage prostitution, it works and kills you too. lol.
Re: Morning conflict by INTRANSIT 24-Nov-03/5:23 PM
Saskae
Re: Wanting by Samantha 24-Nov-03/5:27 PM
Your syllabol count is off.
Re: It tells the time (a tribute to Roddy) by richa 28-Nov-03/3:27 PM
At least the wristless might still sing.
regarding some deleted poem... 2-Dec-03/3:53 PM
Like a piece of cheese cake passing itself off as a whoopie cushion scratch n sniff. But I'll give you a six for making great use of a dictionary, and "Pulminary consciousness" lol. 6
regarding some deleted poem... 2-Dec-03/3:56 PM
That, and blue toilet water.
regarding some deleted poem... 2-Dec-03/4:00 PM
A wonderful projection on an absent canvas.
regarding some deleted poem... 2-Dec-03/4:04 PM
I am alone. But, with cable. I am gay, but unhappy.
I am a fire hose at an igloos cremation. I am a turnip.
Re: Ode to My Crack by J.B. Manning 2-Dec-03/6:14 PM
"Death is the maker of the mask that veils the sickness of addiction. Sorrow and suffering are but a mild comfort to the junkie. Whence the pain has come is evident to everyone but that single lost soul, until he wills himself to break free and is forever made stronger by the journey."

LOLTTM! um death is the maker of blee. when you find addiction is a g string taco in an industrial crack pipe then suck your boobie empty and start at go!?

YOU ARE AN IDIOT! As soon as you embrace that fact you'll be able to unglue that penis off of your chin and put it back on your forehead.
regarding some deleted poem... 2-Dec-03/6:48 PM
Yep.
regarding some deleted poem... 2-Dec-03/6:56 PM
Classy.
Re: No delusions. by darby pyn 5-Dec-03/10:16 PM
As it is with carajou.
Re: Mr Zero? I know who you are. by DreamerSupreme 5-Dec-03/10:35 PM
That and the crotch of the panties.because, well, you see they're crotchless from the alien blood.
Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000 9-Dec-03/4:19 PM
Not yet, but when I do? I won't be because of you.
Re: The Fountain of Youth by miraclemaker 9-Dec-03/6:45 PM
An a boring pouring at that. 6.
regarding some deleted poem... 9-Dec-03/11:02 PM
Honestly, this one was pleasant, but rather dull. 7.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Dec-03/11:46 PM
"my heart has been left
broken into two" I would change into to in.

Otherwise it's killer.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Dec-03/11:50 PM
It's a bit all over the place. 8.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Dec-03/11:51 PM
I also wanted to say that I enjoy your poetry and merry christmas by the way.


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