| Re: a comment on SupremeDreamer by Nirvana13666 |
25-Sep-03/5:49 AM |
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My dear Bachus it is very nice of you to share your life story but I wasn't talking to you. I was talking to Horus. If you don't like my stuff don't read it. If I am such a bad poet then why waste time telling me that? You guys make me sick...insults are a big thing for you guys. It doesn't bring me down so insult away. Oh and for your information Nirvana13666 has history which really doesn't concern you.
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| Re: Madam Z - [<~>] - Snake Pen & Holy Grail by SupremeDreamer |
22-Sep-03/1:27 PM |
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| Re: faulty fate by Nirvana13666 |
9-Sep-03/1:07 PM |
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I see you are one of my biggest fans.....Keep watching because it only gets better love. Thanks for being brutal with some of your comments but true talent doesn't need attitude to back it up. I have been writing for years now buddy and just because my stuff isn't structured doesn't mean I don't know what Iâm doing. We have choices to make and with expression that is mainly what it is about. HAVE A NICE DAY :)
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| Re: a comment on Love till you hate by NNirvana13666 |
22-Aug-03/8:00 AM |
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I see you liked this one Horus. What did you like about it?
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| Re: a comment on walk out by NNirvana13666 |
22-Aug-03/7:53 AM |
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What I don't understand is how you can even try and criticize my writing because of how it is written and not for its content, you know it is good. I mean look at the crap that gets posted here. I know what well structured poems look like but why try and follow a standard perspective of expression when the whole point of expression is individuality?
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| Re: A Surgeons Butchery by SupremeDreamer |
22-Aug-03/7:47 AM |
Nice wording but it is like telling a story, nothing really poetic about it maybe that was your intention.
I have seen better from you so since I know what you are capable of I'll give a 4.
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| Re: faulty fate by Nirvana13666 |
22-Aug-03/7:41 AM |
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I'd like to inform my readers that I am a female. Please don't judge if your own stuff is basically crap. I want a talented writer to review my stuff then I'll take comments into consideration.
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| Re: Forget it...k? by psikosis |
21-Aug-03/11:01 AM |
My heart bleeds black blood,
blood that I can taste,
Nice line. I like when people write and realize poetry isnât about rhyming. Your words flow freely and when read aloud seem like no other words can fit next to each other.
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| Re: eyeh8LIEph by psikosis |
21-Aug-03/10:58 AM |
Stupid fucking idiots canât appreciate individuality. Poems donât have to be about pretty flowers and happy thoughts. Writing is a form of expression and I think your writing is awesome because I get a feel of what youâre feeling. Your words are piercing and I truly enjoy reading your work. Donât let these fuck turds discourage you.
Note: Creative Criticism is about helping the writer get better at his/her form of writing. When you just put a writer down you do nothing to enhance their talent.
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