Re: a comment on (untitled) by http://bandgeek	6-Sep-03/5:09 PM
Is it not sloppily obvious?
Re: (untitled) by http://bandgeek	6-Sep-03/5:07 PM
title ideas anyone, or other constructive feedback?
Re: A very special thank you to a very special someone by Livvie	6-Sep-03/5:03 PM
Hmm. Ancestor or infant or someone else? I think the idea of Whitney Houston's "I will always love you" takes away from the piece.
Re: missing time (revised) by Bill Z Bub	6-Sep-03/4:59 PM
Very nice, but changing from "she/her" to "you" was a little confusing. 9
Re: a comment on To My Future Wife by http://bandgeek	2-Aug-03/9:43 AM
Thanks, I think you might be the only one that read past the cheesy title.
Re: a comment on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek	27-Jul-03/1:21 PM
Yeah, I know, but the metaphor is marriage. The non-metaphorical "it" could be about any possession we carry around, like stupid VHS movies from the 80's or Nalgene water bottles.
Re: a comment on Part II:Rhetoric by http://bandgeek	27-Jul-03/1:15 PM
You came back for more even though you hated part 1. Must be an addict.
Re: a comment on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek	27-Jul-03/1:06 PM
Read the above comment, it is about marriage. Why haul it around and maintain it instead of rent sex like everyone else. Get it? And I am sure you mean "guy" in the genderless way, like "you guys".
Re: a comment on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek	27-Jul-03/12:01 PM
Its about marriage, so yeah, Dildo would be a good title.