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A very special thank you to a very special someone (Other) by Livvie This poem is a very special
Thank you, to a very special someone
Who I never got to know and understand
Iâll love you forever and eternity
Youâve been my inspiration
The past couple of days, and for
Thatâs Iâm very grateful
I know you will never read
This poem as you are no longer here
Although you are deep within
My heart
Iâll treasure the memories
For years to come, when am
Married and have grandchildren
And Iâm old and grey
I know were apart but
In spirit weâll always be together
Some of the things I do
From day to day
I do for you, I visit you where
Youâve been laid to rest I tell you
How my life is going
And leave flowers in the vase
I know you canât hear me
Or understand me there isnât
Many that do, but I sing to you
When Iâm with you
âI will always love youâ
because of the way I feel even
though we never got to meet
I found another song that reminds me of you
Its called moments and it reminds me
Of the moments that you were on this earth
Youâre the world to me and always will be
I just look forward to the day when
I will hear the pitter patter of tiny feet
Iâve had some laughs and fun
Sighâs and cries
But just remember that I will always love you
Forever and you will always be in my memory
For enternity and for as long as I live
And breathe on this earth
âI love you and always willâ
Up the ladder:
Loki's Tryst
Down the ladder:
lament and retrograde
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Posted: September 6, 2003 4:56 PM PDT; Last modified: September 6, 2003 4:56 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.3585887 Overall Rank: 3305 Comments:
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6-Sep-03/5:03 PM
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Hmm. Ancestor or infant or someone else? I think the idea of Whitney Houston's "I will always love you" takes away from the piece.
I hope to Christ that my death doesn't inspire something as ham-handedly inept as this massive lump of flatulence. Poetry is not just about writing down some emotions and randomly interspersing them with pointless line breaks.
You must remember to pause every now and again to stare wistfully out of an open window. -9-
You can really say anything you like about this poem, and poetry is all about emotions. And you can use your big word to try and degrade as many ppl and too be honest if you died there probably wouldn't be as much to write. You obviously not a man of compasion, I just wanted a piece of my sister to go on since she really didn't have a cat in hells chance of doing so for herself.
But then again everyone is entitled to there opinion, so i appreciate you comment. liv 152 view(s)
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