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A very special thank you to a very special someone (Other) by Livvie

This poem is a very special Thank you, to a very special someone Who I never got to know and understand I’ll love you forever and eternity You’ve been my inspiration The past couple of days, and for That’s I’m very grateful I know you will never read This poem as you are no longer here Although you are deep within My heart I’ll treasure the memories For years to come, when am Married and have grandchildren And I’m old and grey I know were apart but In spirit we’ll always be together Some of the things I do From day to day I do for you, I visit you where You’ve been laid to rest I tell you How my life is going And leave flowers in the vase I know you can’t hear me Or understand me there isn’t Many that do, but I sing to you When I’m with you “I will always love you” because of the way I feel even though we never got to meet I found another song that reminds me of you Its called moments and it reminds me Of the moments that you were on this earth You’re the world to me and always will be I just look forward to the day when I will hear the pitter patter of tiny feet I’ve had some laughs and fun Sigh’s and cries But just remember that I will always love you Forever and you will always be in my memory For enternity and for as long as I live And breathe on this earth “I love you and always will”

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7-Sep-03/2:31 PM
I hope to Christ that my death doesn't inspire something as ham-handedly inept as this massive lump of flatulence. Poetry is not just about writing down some emotions and randomly interspersing them with pointless line breaks.

You must remember to pause every now and again to stare wistfully out of an open window.

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