regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jul-03/10:03 AM
Confused me on the first read. Was thinking you went from second person to first person then finished and it made sense. Had to read it over to get the full feel of it. Nice poem... short and direct to the point and the meaning. Keep on writing, as a fellow poet I can speak for us all saying we like seeing others ideals to widen our own.
Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin	23-Jul-03/10:06 AM
Interesting.
Re: Her Sleeping Form by JoyLuck	23-Jul-03/10:10 AM
You set my heart on an ending that would compliment the beginning and that I didn't get. Being mislead or supprised by verse doesn't do anything for me. Had I not set my mind to how I wanted it ended I'm sure it would have been great. Not knocking your work by any means it was still good. Keep on writing, as a fellow poet I can speak for us all saying we like seeing others ideals to widen our own.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jul-03/4:03 AM
Another great poem... I like it :) I enjoy reading poems about subjects that are new... well new to me. Ones I've never seen wrote about before. *acts like he's on xanga* PROPS MAD PROPS :P
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jul-03/4:06 AM
Interesting form.. but it says what you wanted it to. Those who know you will understand, and some who don't. But with your subject and meaning I'm in total agreence. Not sure I spelled that right...hehe
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jul-03/4:10 AM
Damn! You tell um how it is girl! Kinda reminded me of "This is the song that never ends, it goes on and on my friends, someone started singing it not knowing what it was and they'll continue singing it forever just before... This is the song that never ends..." But it made me laugh and see your point... again good job :)