Re: Baginga by JoyLuck |
18-Jul-03/1:07 AM |
I think it is absolutely fantstic...
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regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Jul-03/6:50 AM |
It's ok... maybe I would like it a little better if it were deeper. Then I could feel it more.
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Re: Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik |
19-Jul-03/6:51 AM |
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19-Jul-03/6:51 AM |
well with haiku there's really not that much room to be creative. nice though
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Re: Crucifixion by Mr Pig |
19-Jul-03/6:52 AM |
Maybe you want to check your syllable count?
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Re: Cussedness by Nicholas Jones |
19-Jul-03/6:53 AM |
a lot going on here... i like it
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Re: Cussedness by Nicholas Jones |
19-Jul-03/6:53 AM |
a lot going on here... i like it
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regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Jul-03/6:56 AM |
Sylvia Plath hated her father too....
"you do not do....black shoe"
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23-Jul-03/7:25 PM |
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23-Jul-03/7:25 PM |
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Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
23-Jul-03/7:26 PM |
it's pretty rad... i like it
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