on Crucifixion by Mr Pig
19 Jul 2003, 6:52 AM
Maybe you want to check your syllable count?
on Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik
19 Jul 2003, 6:51 AM
Interesting indeed.
on some deleted poem
23 Jul 2003, 7:25 PM
that's some deep stuff
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
23 Jul 2003, 7:26 PM
it's pretty rad... i like it
on some deleted poem
19 Jul 2003, 6:50 AM
It's ok... maybe I would like it a little better if it were deeper. Then I could feel it more.
on some deleted poem
19 Jul 2003, 6:51 AM
well with haiku there's really not that much room to be creative. nice though
on Cussedness by Nicholas Jones
19 Jul 2003, 6:53 AM
a lot going on here... i like it
on Cussedness by Nicholas Jones
19 Jul 2003, 6:53 AM
a lot going on here... i like it
on some deleted poem
19 Jul 2003, 6:56 AM
Sylvia Plath hated her father too....
"you do not do....black shoe"
"you do not do....black shoe"
on some deleted poem
23 Jul 2003, 7:25 PM
Good content