Re: a comment on beyond sences by calilegzzz |
19-Jul-03/12:48 AM |
Thank you, and I have to agree with you. I never really was happy with it it dosent really flow the way I would like, but I do believe it was a bad day and I really wasnt "flowing" realy great either. It is one I will be returning to at a later date!!
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Re: a comment on beyond sences by calilegzzz |
17-Jul-03/10:38 PM |
As in geographicaly speaking or mentaly speaking?(hehe)
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Re: a comment on beyond sences by calilegzzz |
17-Jul-03/10:38 PM |
I am afraid I feel some what sorry for you then, to believe my poem would mean you have experienced it as well.....there is still time!!!
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Re: a comment on beyond sences by calilegzzz |
17-Jul-03/10:36 PM |
A good mysterious or a not so good one?(hehe)
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Re: a comment on moment in time by calilegzzz |
11-Jun-03/8:07 AM |
not sure i am understanding you at all!!?
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Re: a comment on SHE TRIES by calilegzzz |
15-Apr-03/1:57 AM |
I say I think i agree!! thanks.
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Re: a comment on all in my head by calilegzzz |
14-Apr-03/2:17 AM |
What the hell is brown sticky nappy?
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Re: a comment on all in my head by calilegzzz |
14-Apr-03/2:16 AM |
yea, I am afraid i am stuck in basic, i am working on it though, thank you for the feed back.
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Re: a comment on all in my head by calilegzzz |
14-Apr-03/2:15 AM |
thank you for your kind words, I am always nervours when any of my poems go public, (fear of rejection) (teeheehee) anyway thank you!
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Re: a comment on all in my head by calilegzzz |
14-Apr-03/2:13 AM |
thank you for the feed back, I enjoy when someone makes me look at my stuff and do a little thinking.
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Re: a comment on SHE TRIES by calilegzzz |
12-Apr-03/6:01 PM |
Try it now Mikius, I repaired it !! I didnt meant to submiot that one, it wasnt quit finished!
And thank you very much for the feed back!!
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Re: Guess Who? by Nagi |
1-Apr-03/6:40 AM |
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Re: Isolate by Beseech |
31-Mar-03/4:31 PM |
I enjoyed reading this poem, I was able to fell the writers feelings, I like that!
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