on You Were There by danevie
26 Aug 2002, 5:55 AM
past and presenet tense kinda mixed up
on some deleted poem
26 Aug 2002, 7:08 AM
Breathtaking form,
and a great way to catch all of the senses... I like!!
and a great way to catch all of the senses... I like!!
on Empty Street by gianni
26 Aug 2002, 7:10 AM
Nice!!!!
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 Jul 2002, 1:43 AM
A Limerick written by Dark Angel
so bland and without taste.
I hope you have time.
because reading this,
mine was a waste............
so bland and without taste.
I hope you have time.
because reading this,
mine was a waste............
on some deleted poem
26 Aug 2002, 5:53 AM
I thought it had depth. trying to create picture of this was like a nightmare. Dark, with nowhere to go.