poemranker ::20 most recent comments by lastobelus (101-120)

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on some deleted poem 9 Mar 2003, 5:08 PM
If you don't mind my asking, what happened to your other eye?
on A piece i shall never play again by ==Doylum 9 Mar 2003, 3:56 PM
when I was a kid i always tried to see how far I could stick the tape in my father's tape measures out before it flopped over.

Sometimes I'd get it out 10 or 12 feet, on a good $20 tape measure. Always I'd try to ease it out farther; always it'd flop before the end of the tape.

Whenever I fucked up a $20 tape measure, I got a good licking.
on Mebi by ==Doylum 9 Mar 2003, 3:46 PM
delightful...
I love line 7, "twinkly stars arms"
I think the last line could have more oomph, because I read bukowski too much and have this last-line thing
on some deleted poem 9 Mar 2003, 5:13 PM
raw, breathless, daring