Re: Never Alone at Night by Limness	23-Feb-03/8:36 PM
I smile at your foolishness, and comfort you, dear. Move on, now. you must, or you shall waste.
Re: The last day of an old year by poetandknowit	23-Feb-03/8:38 PM
Detox? Recovery? Grief? Rebirth? All of these, and coffee. The protracted awareness borne of desolation, well sung. You have a bell of a voice, Mr. Knowit.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Feb-03/8:41 PM
Ah, son. The pain of this stains the page, and stains me in the reading of it. Look to poetry for answers; keep your questions sharp. Your outcry here heard is one that is meant for the inner chambers, not the vast ethers. Inside, you may make something of it; out here, it bleeds into nothingness, and wastes you.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Feb-03/8:49 PM
Well told.
Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub	23-Feb-03/8:51 PM
Nice reconstruction of a moment gone too soon.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Feb-03/8:57 PM
But do dreams served up so late go cold before they are consumed? Or do they consume you? You should talk to the Limness.
Re: Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	23-Feb-03/9:03 PM
Your random capitalisation and punctuation errors distract from the punch of this; also, i tend to agree that the subject needs to be better defined for the reader to feel empathy on the order of magnitude you seem to be courting. S2L2 "then" should be "Than"
Re: And Then She Got Over It by Freethinker1602	23-Feb-03/9:17 PM
Take notes as you walk.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Feb-03/9:34 PM
Forgive my ignorance; I am new here, but, why did you waste our time with this?
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Feb-03/9:35 PM
Point of view seems to shift. Never a good thing, unintentionally.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Feb-03/9:37 PM
The rhyming seems too forced to be effective; at the same time, the sing-song rhythm of this is eerily haunting. "sinewed cage" is a fantastic image.