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20 most recent comments by shwenatjadeflower (21-40)

Re: What R U? by Sigh'ense... 31-Jul-02/5:27 PM
well I, personally, am a fan of yours...hehe.
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Aug-02/12:34 PM
jennifer, if it wasn't for the comments about farts which i think dark angel started, this would be your best poem ever, i love you, keep writing, oh and put that one about the crash on here, i think everyone would like it, although you obviously dont care what they think
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Aug-02/12:34 PM
jennifer, if it wasn't for the comments about farts which i think dark angel started, this would be your best poem ever, i love you, keep writing, oh and put that one about the crash on here, i think everyone would like it, although you obviously dont care what they think
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Aug-02/12:36 PM
umm...jenn...i told your mother to lock the midicine cabinet, did i not? lol, this is humorous
Re: lost by mitchski 7-Aug-02/12:38 PM
um...ok, i like it, but its strange
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Aug-02/12:39 PM
you lost your permit? wait, didn't you find it last week? im confuused. um...yea, good poeme
regarding some deleted poem... 15-Aug-02/6:14 PM
what in the hell is your problem defouling my poem? i said i dont take advise because i dont want idiotic suggestions from people like you. its my poetry and it came from my heart and your foul words are ruining it. so take your happy ass back to the little hole you call a home and curl up and die for all i fuckin care. i love this poem, it's about the love of my life and if I am in any way adding to your problems by writing a poem to my boyfriend you can kiss my ass and get over it. Obviously there is something wrong with you for my poems to effect you in this negative way. but hell take it the way you wish. love you. Jade
Re: Friends Diminished by shwenatjadeflower 15-Aug-02/6:43 PM
you are so sweet to protect me from the evil stupid people
Re: School by shwenatjadeflower 15-Aug-02/6:45 PM
yea...well....i'd like to see ya try :P
regarding some deleted poem... 15-Aug-02/6:48 PM
OMG! i feel soooo loved you guys *tear* and it is love baby. :)

Re: School by shwenatjadeflower 17-Aug-02/5:40 PM
ballet? you gotta be kidding me, never would i wear a pink fucking tutu
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Aug-02/8:21 PM
yes
Re: Friends Diminished by shwenatjadeflower 18-Aug-02/8:28 PM
omg, jenn, relax, im not going down there to fuck him, im going down there so i CAN meet him and see if he is really the person i see online, if not, duh im not gonna fuck him, but i do care for him very much, and if he is the man i think he is, then he's the man i love and he is getting my ribbon. do not think i would go to houston and just fuck him and come home, i would not, you of all people should know me better than that. i love you jenn, but sometimes i wonder at how well you know me if you can think i would do that then obviously you dont know me well enough
regarding some deleted poem... 18-Aug-02/8:41 PM
oh hush, its a story, i just wanted to get it out of my head...the poems i write are read by my boyfriend and most of these poems are about him, this one is about a crush from fifth grade, we are good friends now. thats it. he knows all about it, i sent this to him to help explain. geez, if my poems were all about different guys that would be like over five different guys. no, no other guys. pain is about my friend that i was pissed at.
Re: Fragments by 1Sapphire1 21-Aug-02/2:33 PM
:) this is sweet, keep up the good work
Re: Fragments by 1Sapphire1 21-Aug-02/2:33 PM
:) this is sweet, keep up the good work
Re: The Only Solution by Angelofpain25 21-Aug-02/2:57 PM
Oh, my, goodness, don't listen to him, i don't know you yet-YET- but I will miss you if you die, don't kill yourself. and you are wrong, they judge you everywhere, heaven or hell or valhalla, wherever you believe you'll go after you die...it isn't the right answer to your obvious problems. your suffering won't end, if you commit suicide you'll go to hell, and there it is only eternal suffering. so, don't kill yourself, one: it isn't the end of your suffering, and two: you'd be wasting talent as a poet. lol. i hope you see that it isn't right to kill yourself, it isn't,or shouldn't be any persons choice about the time of anyone elses or thier own death. i will be looking for more poetry from you. love, jade. :)
Re: Secret, Admirer by <~> 21-Aug-02/3:28 PM
ok, sorry you guys i got it the first time, before the comments, but i think its only because i have oft had the feeling that night was creeping up bihind me while i fumble for the keyhole on a dark, creepy street...maybe its just me?
Re: Secret, Admirer by <~> 21-Aug-02/3:28 PM
ok, sorry you guys i got it the first time, before the comments, but i think its only because i have oft had the feeling that night was creeping up behind me while i fumble for the keyhole on a dark, creepy street...maybe its just me?
regarding some deleted poem... 22-Aug-02/5:31 PM
lmao, no no no, you see the guy i am going to SEE in houston IS my boyfriend. lol. and the "poor sap" on my site is his best friend, who also lives in houston. lol, stephen, francis is my bf.


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