Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
11-Feb-03/1:56 PM |
hmm... well we all have to start somewhere.
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Re: a comment on 6:02 by corinacorrie |
6-Feb-03/6:19 PM |
um... thanks? care to expand? i just wrote this tonite- i just felt like putting it up here right away...
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Re: I Had by Spindle |
6-Feb-03/3:11 PM |
Great poem! Maybe think about changing "and that's the end" since it doesn't need to rhyme, just a thought.
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Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub |
22-Jan-03/4:11 PM |
I love it--- especially
"as she breathes/through chapped lips/so perfect."
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