on Cliche by ifni
21 May 2002, 11:28 AM
Interesting imagery...
on Putney at Low Tide by Christof
10 Sep 2002, 11:19 PM
Interesting imagery. I'm not certain that I follow it completely, but I do like it.
on The Bicycle Rider by [mojo]
10 Sep 2002, 11:20 PM
I must admit... it's not quite what I pictured with the drug references.
on For fun by Cha no Onna
22 Aug 2002, 11:11 PM
This is downright cute! Got a chuckle out of me.
on To You by Cha no Onna
19 May 2002, 10:53 PM
This reminds me far too much of things I've seen and is well done. It stumbles a little in the 4th stanza, but nicely done overall.
on some deleted poem
19 May 2002, 11:41 PM
Considering that you posted this anonymously, that tells us quite a bit about you, ne?
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I suggest that everyone be required to have at least read good poetry before trying to write good poetry. Because most of what is on here is pathetically self-indulgent juvenalia.
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I suggest that everyone be required to have at least read good poetry before trying to write good poetry. Because most of what is on here is pathetically self-indulgent juvenalia.
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2002, 11:10 PM
I'm not really certain I understand this one.
on some deleted poem
10 Sep 2002, 11:49 PM
This feels like it's starting to lead you somewhere and then just kind of drops off into oblivion.
on THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
28 May 2004, 6:23 PM
I'd be willing to bet that at some point in your life, you worked at a renaissance faire! Not bad work over all. -8-