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13-Sep-03/2:18 PM |
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Hi Tom! I like skiing in the alps, and walking my dog at the park. I'm single, professional, and packing heat! I like boats, goats, and floats, but parades put me to sleep.
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| Re: Being Called Dave by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
18-Sep-03/6:51 PM |
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18-Sep-03/6:53 PM |
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| Re: Oedipus' last glass of bubbles by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
18-Sep-03/8:34 PM |
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What really amazes me about poemranker is: that this absolute shrine of a haiku is being avoid as far as votes go... yet it's the most read? That's The Jew factor people making you nosey yet weak. you disgust me. You make me all want to eat your three legged vulvas.
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| Re: Stygian Serpent by SupremeDreamer |
21-Sep-03/7:21 PM |
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I just picked up an 8 ball, cheers. Salton Sea you later.
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| Re: You Had To Go by peaceseeker |
21-Sep-03/7:25 PM |
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23-Sep-03/11:23 AM |
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I think your head is full of "ether", and probably your small intestine. do you really believe that Jews are being persecuted in America? I hope you do, because, as far as polarity is concerned you are backwards, like your hat, shading your ass.
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23-Sep-03/11:26 AM |
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Greatest title yet (this morning) but a tad too long. Here's a nine, As compared to your other work this is a huge improvement. I think you need more metaphorical links within your tale betwen the grocery store and the middle east. That would send this poem into a much moe interesting category.
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| Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
23-Sep-03/11:30 AM |
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Did you watch Carnivale last night?
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| Re: SupremeDreamer by Nirvana13666 |
23-Sep-03/11:37 AM |
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Good lord, I didn't know you guys had met?
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| Re: Let's Dance by temptalia |
23-Sep-03/12:47 PM |
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Oh my... That sounds lovely. The piece could stand an edit. An the meantime here's an eight.
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| Re: 575 by nentwined |
1-Oct-03/11:49 AM |
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That's why I (from cow on) will be opting for the infamous 1-0-1.
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1-Oct-03/12:01 PM |
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1-Oct-03/12:04 PM |
A carefully stacked pile of shucked shit.
Amazingly painful and absurdly meaningless.
Because, we were convinced that if anyone could escape death that 'anyone' would've been you?
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| Re: Fate by leviathan |
1-Oct-03/12:37 PM |
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Fuck it apparently, i'm not elligable to blow you up, so just fucking go explode on your own. ARGH! blach!
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| Re: A Haiku Haiku by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
1-Oct-03/5:59 PM |
Clearly you are both smelly corks bobbing in a sea of overly warmed baby brie. 10!
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| Re: death warmed over by kingit |
3-Oct-03/4:00 PM |
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More cuts? i was looking for death warmed over easy. My suggestion would be Don't over use an overused style overly. 8
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3-Oct-03/4:37 PM |
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Weirdly vaguely literate. That's Aced!
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3-Oct-03/4:42 PM |
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3-Oct-03/9:58 PM |
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Iam almost speechless, they say love and hate are parallel so your love for me is deeper then hell, Hmm? You are the first and last of my love,s how does it feel when I ride the swell over eight feet or more of perfection,,I hold my Breath and swalow hard ,,,the O2 I shared with you and then some for ever more your name is a gift, My name is your other half for ever more i love you to death.And resurrection can give a hell of an errection... see you in my reality >HEDWIG Is carved across your heart.
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