Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub	22-Dec-02/10:57 AM
Awesome!
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Dec-02/11:08 AM
"Damnitalltohell," The world has no business being alright when my life is fucked up. I agree! Destroy the moon, goddamnit, destroy the world, despite midnight's plans unfurled, despite the plans for divine grace, in this at least I'll save face.-9
Re: downtown bus by Bill Z Bub	22-Dec-02/11:10 AM
Nice.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Dec-02/8:59 AM
Very nice.
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Dec-02/12:10 PM
I like it; 'his atonement' is nice.
Re: The Eternal Center by Quarton	31-Dec-02/12:14 PM
The ending is a bit abrupt, I'm guilty of that kinda' thing myself. I like it, it's very thought inspiring, and very near profound, and it flows well. A nice use of words.
Re: myself by tstormer	31-Dec-02/12:15 PM
Interesting; I like the last line, especially.
Re: The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT	31-Dec-02/12:43 PM
I really like the first stanza, very witty use of words. I'm probably not qualified to comment to much on the direction of the meaning or the choices you've made, but I enjoyed it, though somehow it seems to be missing something.
Re: The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT	31-Dec-02/12:45 PM
actually now that I look at it again, it's the second stanza, not the first, which I like so much,... the first is good, too, though. I'm such a 'wuss'.
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Dec-02/12:48 PM
Hmmm.