Re: Innocence lost by deadstar |
5-Nov-02/9:36 AM |
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Re: This Strange Feeling by snowing |
25-Jul-02/8:14 PM |
Work on the depth of your language'
Your rhyme scheme is basic, like mine, But I like it
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Re: Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman |
25-Jul-02/8:11 PM |
I thaught Haiku was 17 syllables. I counted 18.Please correct me if I'm wrong.
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Re: The world by hamgurl |
25-Jul-02/8:07 PM |
You must live in the city. I live in a small community where trust is still inherent in our personalities. I'm sorry the world has treated you so.
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