poemranker ::20 most recent comments by sliver (481-500) and replies

Comments bysliver, 481–500 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Innocence lost by deadstar 5 Nov 2002, 9:36 AM
Our Future?
on This Strange Feeling by snowing 25 Jul 2002, 8:14 PM
Work on the depth of your language'
Your rhyme scheme is basic, like mine, But I like it
on Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman 25 Jul 2002, 8:11 PM
I thaught Haiku was 17 syllables. I counted 18.Please correct me if I'm wrong.
on The world by hamgurl 25 Jul 2002, 8:07 PM
You must live in the city. I live in a small community where trust is still inherent in our personalities. I'm sorry the world has treated you so.